May 18th, Top 8, Mets Lead 11-2…
Posted by Steve L. on May 18th, 2008 · Comments (3)
…and you just know that Hank is calling Brian…right, about, now.

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Get me Costanza!?!?
You have a serious problem with comma usage. In this case, the proper punctuation would be ellipses:
Right … about … now.
But otherwise, you use commas like Elaine uses exclamation points. Haphazardly and poorly.
…Comma police, arrest this man, he talks in maths.
He buzzes like a fridge, he’s like a detuned radio…